Original drabble: "I AM," (PG-13)

[hsavinien]

Title: I AM
Author: H. Savinien
Rating: PG-13
Wordcount: 100
Author's note:  I am goddess(es).  Five days.

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On Monday, I am lush and cruel and too close, my breast brushing her arm as I bend for a pencil.
On Tuesday, I am fleet and wild, hardly conscious of sexuality, though the smell of her hair catches me as I brush past and curls deep in my chest.
On Wednesday, I am punctual and precise, my hand intersecting her wrist at the perfect angle.
On Thursday, I am unpredictable and troublesome, causing strife with a question about her mother.
On Friday, I am quiet calm, helping her build on broken pieces and cooking with her in the evening.

Comments

[yuri-shoujo.livejournal.com]

Oh, I like this. A lot. I love how much you packed in to so few words. Awesome prose poem. <3 Niiiiice.

[hsavinien.livejournal.com]

Thanks, sweet. <3 Are the goddesses I'm referencing pretty clear? (Greek, by the way.)

[yuri-shoujo.livejournal.com]

Hrmn. I'm not terribly familiar with the greek pantheon, so my brain didn't go there immediately, to be honest, so the title did puzzle me a bit. Aphrodite, Artemis, Athena (?I feel like this is not a great guess for some reason. I feel like it should be some sort of time goddess, or something), oh, I can't remember the one who had trouble iwth her mom... I WANT to say Hermaphrodite due to the Athena comic, but I can't remember if she was an actual goddess... s: Maybe Hera, just because Hera tends to be a pain in the ass. And the last one escapes me. I'm pretty sure this is my own ignorance tho interfering.

[hsavinien.livejournal.com]

Not bad. Awesome, that means I was pretty clear. Aphrodite, Artemis, Athena (wisdom, strategy, and reason), Eris (Discord), and Hestia (keeper of hearth/home).

[yuri-shoujo.livejournal.com]

ok, I definitely picked up on the smarts of Athena in there then. It just SOUNDED like an Athena statement (Again, horrible, my personas for them are totally based off a comic XD) And in your defense, I did not pick up on the two who I imagine are all around more obscure (: So, nice job.

[hsavinien.livejournal.com]

Yup, they are a little. ^_^ <3 Yay.