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H. Savinien ([personal profile] hsavinien) wrote2011-01-16 09:46 pm

dS double drabble: "Oops," PG-13 (Fraser/Kowalski)

Title: Oops

Author: H. Savinien
Rating: PG-13
Pairing: Fraser/Kowalski
Disclaimer: Characters belong to the Pauls and Callum. I claim nothing.
Wordcount: 200
Author's note: Just a moment in time.

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Ray was listening to the radio, a smile crinkling the corners of his eyes. He had his chair tilted back on two legs, his eyes closed, and a pencil between two fingers tapping out the beat. Benton watched him for a moment, eyes caught by Ray's jittery hands, then realized he was staring and coughed. Ray jerked at the sound and the chair went over in a sprawl of limbs and a surprised yelp.

“Ray!” Benton lunged, but missed, nearly tripping over Diefenbaker and going down himself.

“Oh dear.” He scrambled to kneel beside Ray. Ray was groaning, but appeared whole and his pupils were normal. “I'm sorry, Ray, I didn't think I'd startle you so badly.”

“Nah, it's okay. I shouldn'ta been sitting like an idiot.” Ray sat up, wincing. “Jesus, Fraser. Make a little noise when you walk, okay? I think I sprained my ass.”

Dief sniggered.

“Hush, Dief, that's rude. Can you stand?”

“Yeah. Ow.” Ray levered himself up, hand clenching hot on Benton's arm. “Ow. Okay, ass and elbow.”

Benton pulled him up and close enough to whisper in his ear. “Would you like me to check?”

 

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[personal profile] akamine_chan 2011-01-17 06:27 am (UTC)(link)
Hee. Sweet!
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[identity profile] hsavinien.livejournal.com 2011-01-17 06:29 am (UTC)(link)
Thanks. ^_^

[identity profile] whoisus.livejournal.com 2011-01-17 08:30 am (UTC)(link)
That was lovely :)
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[personal profile] luzula 2011-01-17 11:46 am (UTC)(link)
Awww, unexpected established relationship.

[identity profile] exbex.livejournal.com 2011-01-17 01:56 pm (UTC)(link)
Fraser, you dirty dog :D
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[personal profile] helens78 2011-01-17 03:06 pm (UTC)(link)
Hee! That was cute. :)
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[identity profile] hsavinien.livejournal.com 2011-01-17 06:11 pm (UTC)(link)
Thank you kindly.
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[identity profile] hsavinien.livejournal.com 2011-01-17 06:12 pm (UTC)(link)
Yep. ^_^
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[identity profile] hsavinien.livejournal.com 2011-01-17 06:13 pm (UTC)(link)
^_^ Heheh.
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[identity profile] hsavinien.livejournal.com 2011-01-17 06:13 pm (UTC)(link)
Thank you very much.

[identity profile] yuri-shoujo.livejournal.com 2011-01-17 08:03 pm (UTC)(link)
Lol, cute. I still love how you write the doggy. XD
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[personal profile] jesse_the_k 2011-01-17 10:17 pm (UTC)(link)
Very nice!
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[identity profile] neu111.livejournal.com 2011-01-17 10:41 pm (UTC)(link)
Yes, Benton. We'd like you to check! :)
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[identity profile] hsavinien.livejournal.com 2011-01-17 11:25 pm (UTC)(link)
Heheh. Dief is snarky.
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[identity profile] hsavinien.livejournal.com 2011-01-17 11:25 pm (UTC)(link)
Thank you. ^_^
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[identity profile] hsavinien.livejournal.com 2011-01-17 11:25 pm (UTC)(link)
I know, right?

[identity profile] how-obscure.livejournal.com 2011-01-18 02:26 am (UTC)(link)
Dirty, dirty Fraser. I love it! Hee! I liked your description of Ray in the chair, but the whole drabble was just great, really.
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[identity profile] hsavinien.livejournal.com 2011-01-18 05:49 am (UTC)(link)
Why, he's only going to check on Ray's elbow, of course! ^_- Thank you.

[identity profile] ride-4ever.livejournal.com 2012-04-28 12:01 pm (UTC)(link)
Oh, too cute! "Would you like me to check" and snarky!Dief.
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[identity profile] hsavinien.livejournal.com 2012-04-28 04:00 pm (UTC)(link)
Dief is made of snarky. ^_^