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luzula ([personal profile] luzula) wrote in [personal profile] hsavinien 2010-10-02 06:51 pm (UTC)

Welcome to the fandom! This is a lovely little story. I like how you tie together the beginning and the end with the smell of books. The dialogue is great, too. And I like this sentence:

“That would be acceptable, Ray,” he replied, letting his amusement curl softly behind the words.

I hope you write more due South! : )

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