Hi. I like to snoop when someone I don't know comments on my writing.

This is lovely. Your use of language is as rhythmic as the music and the movements of the conductor your narrator is describing.

If I had one bit of crit, it would be your opening and closing lines. I love that the prose starts and ends on the same theme, as a piece of music always comes back to the melody, but given the importance of that bit, it might be worth setting it apart by not using contractions. Of course, that's just my opinion. Feel free to ignore it as you please.